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功能?一：?現(xiàn)象/問題?描述

... has attracted[capture]?extensive attention of the society,which has brought us a lot of benefits but has triggered some enormous problems as well. One of the serious troubles facing us at present is ...

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二：分析原因

1.總闡述

A number of factors might account for the phenomenon.

2.Perhaps the primary reason is ...

3.But the fundamental element is...

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三：解決問題

總

In view of the seriousness of the problem of..., a serious of effective measures should be taken to cope with the situation.

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分措施?government should establish some regulations to...

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問題解決總結(jié)

“最后[finally=eventually,ultimately]，with the efforts of all parts concerned, the problem will be solved thoroughly;? ??否則if we continue to ignore the above-mentioned issue, more problems will crop up and once the harmful influence accumulates to a certain degree,it will surely threaten the development of the entire society.

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四：觀點(diǎn)闡述

1.主旨

2.觀點(diǎn)I: in favor of the idea of doing

3.觀點(diǎn)間的銜接

There is a grain of truth in these statements,?然而?a close examination would reveal how ridiculous the statement is.

4.觀點(diǎn)II:?例子?can give the details of this argument.

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五：觀點(diǎn)結(jié)論

好?or?壞?in general?很難【difficult =arduous】?as it depends very much[exceedingly, intensely, absolutely] on the situation of,,,?然而，個(gè)人認(rèn)為【??in my?opinion?=from my?perspective、standpoint】...

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六：展望未來

1.Is?[Important= vital,crucial,profound, play a pushing role]?for every individual. With its seemingly magic power, it can not only,,, but serve as an efficient instrument for individuals to... and eventually promote the rapid progress of the...

七：漫畫描述

八：引語解釋

There is an old saying...it’s the experience of our forefathers,?然而[however=as a matter of fact,?while in fact?it is the other way around]?it is correct in?許多?cases even today.

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替???換

2.firstly= on the outset ,previously,initially,

3.[adj.]More and more= on the rise

4.Secondly=subsequently

5.Lastly=ultimately, at a final point

Because(on the ground that)=on the ground that

6.Because of= on account of, in light of ,be responsible for

7.Many= an army of, a vast /considerable amount of

8.Pay/pour/?attach?attention to=?

lay stress/emphasis on

11. big= massive, colossal, tremendous??

13.??always= invariably?

14.??dangerous??= hazardous?

15.so?=?consequently, accordingly,hence,

16.??people?=??individuals, characters, folks? ?

17.improve=promote,enhance, reinforce,strengthen,??

18.aspect=???dimension, sphere

19.cause=? ??give rise to, lead to, result in?

20.want =desire?

1.remember??= bear in mind that?