摘要：為大家分享前考官simon演示的9分雅思小作文?？脊儆H筆，用最正統(tǒng)的4段式寫(xiě)作，本文主題-餅圖：三地用水，共168詞。苦于小作文的烤鴨們，可以好好研讀模仿。

相比較雅思大作文，網(wǎng)絡(luò)上與市面上的小作文資料相對(duì)較少，質(zhì)量上乘的就更少，而天下烤鴨，苦小作文久矣，迫切需要圖表類范文的指導(dǎo)，所以，請(qǐng)看本文前考官同學(xué)的精彩演繹。餅圖：三地用水，共168詞，band 9。

考官的四段套路：introduction+review+2 details。

話題：

The pie charts below compare water usage in San Diego, California and the rest of the world.

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范文

The pie charts give information about the water used for residential, industrial and agricultural purposes in San Diego County, California, and the world as a whole.

It is noticeable that more water is consumed by homes than by industry or agriculture in the two American regions. By contrast, agriculture accounts for the vast majority of water used worldwide.

In San Diego County and California State, residential water consumption accounts for 60% and 39% of total water usage. By contrast, a mere 8% of the water used globally goes to homes. The opposite trend can be seen when we look at water consumption for agriculture. This accounts for a massive 69% of global water use, but only 17% and 28% of water usage in San Diego and California respectively.

Such dramatic differences are not seen when we compare the figures for industrial water use. The same proportion of water (23%) is used by industry in San Diego and worldwide, while the figure for California is 10% higher, at 33%.

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