但是沒有一些精妙的表達

想要分數(shù)90+還是很難很難的

今天我們就一起看看

宣老師學生寫的兩篇作文中的好表達

Trust in Business

Currently, there is an?irreversible and inevitable?trend that trust is playing an?increasingly indispensable?role in the commercial society. Just as the old saying goes, trust is the foundational characteristic of an individual. Consequently, it is?highly essential?to be conscious of the?ample?significance of trust and cultivate sufficient trust between the businesses and consumers.

To make it much clearer, trust is of great significance to today's?transactions?on the grounds that?consumers will purchase the products rarely if merchants are?trustworthy?enough. Indeed, the role of trust?is not exclusively confined to this. Trust can contribute to narrowing the gap between the consumers and the merchants to a large extent indispensably. What's more, trust is an?intangible asset?which can boost the value of the products, consequently benefiting both consumers and merchants. Therefore, trust is an?incredibly vital component?of today's society and has been a standard to assess a person.

In conclusion, trust is an indispensable component of a person's personality and is significantly beneficial to enhance the commercial society.

You Reap What You Sow

In an age of instant gratification,?too often have we?found ourselves?yearning for?a certain item or position, for example the admission to a prestigious university,?yet?failing to exert the effort required to gain what you desired.?It?is no surprise that?your result seldom turns out to be satisfactory. The outcome, though unsatisfactory, is without doubt justifiable, as it is basically?improper?for one to gain what he does not deserve.

Just like how?you cannot own harvest melons if you haven't planted melon seeds previously, you can only achieve greatly in what you have paid effort to. Let's imagine an alternative world where people, similar to harvesting melons with sunflowers seeds, can achieve their goals effortlessly all the time. Instead of being a paradise in which you can be prominent and collect your goals like monopoly, this alternative world will most certainly be a chaotic one.?Anyone with rational thinking will not disagree with the fact that?in a fantasied place like the one described above, will overflow with injustice,?considering that?rewards are given to the unworthy. This will also?lead to?despise towards the diligent ones in a global scale, which will result in an unproductive society.

While insisting that you cannot reap beyond what you sow, the writer wishes to?remind you that?other factors such as one’s intelligence also contribute to how much you sow. An intelligent individual might collect their goals with ease. Nevertheless, they still cannot succeed in fields that they did not exert effort into.?To sum up with, nobody should, could, or will succeed in field that they paid no attention to, in other words, you can only reap what you sow.