觀點(diǎn)選擇

The key word: option choice, choose, decision

第一段

闡述問題,背景：with the rapid globalization of economy, nowadays youngsters/students have different options upon graduation.

列舉選擇：some think that to find a job somewhere is beneficial, while others think to start a business of your own is a better choice.

做出選擇：personally，I prefer the former/latter.

過渡句：the following reasons can account for my preference.

第二段 ?三個(gè)論點(diǎn)＋三個(gè)論據(jù)

論點(diǎn)1：first and foremost, there is no doubt that to find a job somewhere is more free.

論據(jù)1：based on big data, it is revealed that a majority of successful social elites have admitted that their careers are free.

論點(diǎn)2：additionally, it is obvious that we can make useful friends when we have a decent job.

論據(jù)2：where there are jobs/work places, there are friends.

論點(diǎn)3：last but no least, no one can deny that to find a job is easier than to start a company.

論據(jù)3：though some people do succeed in starting a business of their own, most of entrepeneurs failed when they just start.

第三段 ?重申觀點(diǎn)+提出希望

重申觀點(diǎn)：in a word, to find a job somewhere is better/more suitable than B. to start a company.

不遺余力：if we spare no efforts to

提出希望：work hard in our career, the futural of our lives will be promising and rosy.