題目一(四級(jí)難度)

㈠模板寫(xiě)作

第一段

①opinion 可替換 option

②look up 仰視，尊重；崇拜

③former 前者

latter 后者

④第一段:首先羅列闡述背景，其次告訴我們有哪些觀點(diǎn)，然后再A和B兩個(gè)觀點(diǎn)之間做出選擇。過(guò)渡句“以下原因可以解釋我的偏好?！?/p>

第二段

①邏輯詞可按照順序進(jìn)行相應(yīng)的替換(例如:firstly—in the first place)

黃金圣衣句型也可以進(jìn)行替換

Ⅰ.補(bǔ)充：倒數(shù)第二句黃金圣衣句型少打了個(gè)"e" →No one can deny that

②personality 名人

③“基于大數(shù)據(jù)……”句型的替換句式↑

④??注意諺語(yǔ)中的"…is a…"對(duì)應(yīng)的形式一定要寫(xiě)上，即單復(fù)數(shù)

→如果是單數(shù)的話就是"…a…"，但是不可數(shù)名詞就不要加"a"；如果是復(fù)數(shù)的話，be動(dòng)詞要變成"are"

⑤instead of 與其……不如……

⑥positive attributes 積極特質(zhì)

(注：論點(diǎn)3"in the celebrities they follow"可根據(jù)相應(yīng)文章進(jìn)行變化，例如：in video games )

非模板寫(xiě)作文章↑

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㈠模板

Nowadays youngsters have different options upon celebrities to look up.Some thinks that to follow an idol as role model is beneficial,while others think celebrities often set a bad example. Personally, I prefer the former. The following reasons can account for my preference.

In the first place,there is no doubt that not all celebrities set a bad example for teenagers.(論點(diǎn) 1) According to a most recent report, many famous personalities use their platforms to promote positive messages and encourage their followers to do good.(論據(jù)1)Furthermore, I firmly believe that it is important to understand that teenagers have their own individual personalities and opinions.(論點(diǎn) 2 )Where there are opinions, there are communications.(論據(jù)2 ) Last but not least, instead of solely relying on celebrities as role models,parents can help their children identify positive attributes in the celebrities they follow.(論點(diǎn)3 )The more parents guide their children, the better role model their children will have.(論據(jù) 3)

In conclusion, while it is true that some celebrities may set a bad example for teenagers, it is unfair to generalize all celebrities as poor role models. If we try our utmost to guide teenagers with positive value, the future of our life will be promising and rosy.

如今年輕人對(duì)名人有不同的選擇。一些人認(rèn)為以偶像為榜樣是有益的，而另一些人則認(rèn)為名人往往會(huì)樹(shù)立壞榜樣。就我個(gè)人而言，我更喜歡前者。以下原因可以解釋我的偏好。

首先，毫無(wú)疑問(wèn)，不是所有的名人都給青少年樹(shù)立了壞榜樣。(論點(diǎn)1)根據(jù)最近的一份報(bào)告，許多名人利用他們的平臺(tái)宣傳積極的信息，并鼓勵(lì)他們的追隨者做好事(論據(jù)1)此外，我堅(jiān)信了解青少年有他們自己的個(gè)性和觀點(diǎn)是很重要的。(論點(diǎn)2)有意見(jiàn)就有交流。(論據(jù)2)最后但并非最不重要的是，父母可以幫助孩子識(shí)別他們偶像的積極屬性，而不是僅僅依靠名人作為榜樣。(論點(diǎn)3)父母引導(dǎo)孩子越多，孩子就會(huì)有更好的榜樣。(論據(jù) 3)

總之，雖然一些名人確實(shí)為青少年樹(shù)立了不好的榜樣，但把所有名人都概括為糟糕的榜樣是不公平的。如果我們盡最大努力用積極的價(jià)值觀來(lái)引導(dǎo)青少年，我們生活的未來(lái)將是光明的。

㈡非模板

In today's society, it is common for teenagers to have a celebrity who they look up to as a role model. While some people argue that this is not a good idea because celebrities often set a bad example, I believe that it is not fair to generalize all celebrities as poor role models.

Firstly,not all celebrities set a bad example for teenagers. Many famous personalities use

Secondly, it is important to remember that parents and guardians play a vital role in shaping a teenager's beliefs and values. Instead of solely relying on celebrities as role models, parents should have open communication with their children and teach them about the importance of critical thinking and making their own decisions.

In conclusion,while it is true that some celebrities may set a bad example for teenagers, it is unfair to generalize all celebrities as poor role models. Teenagers should be encouraged to choose role models based on their positive attributes and parents should take an active role in shaping their children's beliefs and values.

在當(dāng)今社會(huì)，青少年有一個(gè)他們尊敬的名人作為榜樣是很常見(jiàn)的。雖然有些人認(rèn)為這不是一個(gè)好主意，因?yàn)槊送ǔ６际菈陌駱?，但我認(rèn)為把所有名人都概括為壞榜樣是不公平的。

首先，并不是所有的名人都給青少年樹(shù)立了不好的榜樣。許多名人利用他們的平臺(tái)宣傳積極的信息，并鼓勵(lì)他們的粉絲做好事。例如，像艾瑪·沃特森和安吉麗娜·朱莉這樣的名人利用自己的名氣來(lái)倡導(dǎo)婦女權(quán)利和人道主義事業(yè)。這樣的榜樣激勵(lì)青少年負(fù)責(zé)任，對(duì)世界產(chǎn)生積極的影響。

其次，重要的是要記住，父母和監(jiān)護(hù)人在塑造青少年的信仰和價(jià)值觀方面起著至關(guān)重要的作用。父母不應(yīng)該僅僅依靠名人作為榜樣，而是應(yīng)該與孩子進(jìn)行開(kāi)放的交流，并告訴他們名人的重要性批判性思維，自己做決定。

總之，雖然一些名人確實(shí)為青少年樹(shù)立了不好的榜樣，但把所有名人都概括為糟糕的榜樣是不公平的。應(yīng)該鼓勵(lì)青少年根據(jù)他們的積極品質(zhì)來(lái)選擇榜樣，父母應(yīng)該在塑造孩子的信仰和價(jià)值觀方面發(fā)揮積極作用。