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話題：

The diagrams below show the site of a school in 2004 and the plan for changes to the school site in 2024.(Source: Official IELTS Practice Materials 2)? ? ? ?

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范文

The two pictures compare the layout of a school as it was in the year 2004 with a proposed site design for the year 2024.

It is clear that the main change for 2024 involves the addition of a new school building. The school will then be able to accommodate a considerably larger number of students.