摘要：為大家分享前考官simon演示的9分雅思小作文?？脊儆H筆，用最正統(tǒng)的4段式寫作，本文主題-柱狀圖:教育水平，共184詞?？嘤谛∽魑牡目绝唫?，可以好好研讀模仿。

相比較大作文，網(wǎng)絡(luò)上與市面上的小作文資料相對較少，質(zhì)量上乘的就更少，而天下烤鴨，苦小作文久矣，迫切需要圖表類范文的指導(dǎo)，所以，請看本文前考官同學(xué)的精彩演繹。

柱狀圖：教育水平，共184詞，band9.

話題：The charts below show the levels of participation in education and science in developing and industrialised countries in 1980 and 1990.

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滿分范文：

The three bar charts show average years of schooling, numbers of scientists and technicians, and research and development spending in developing and developed countries. Figures are given for 1980 and 1990.

It is clear from the charts that the figures for developed countries are much higher than those for developing nations. Also, the charts show an overall increase in participation in education and science from 1980 to 1990.

People in developing nations attended school for an average of around 3 years, with only a slight increase in years of schooling from 1980 to 1990. On the other hand, the figure for industrialised countries rose from nearly 9 years of schooling in 1980 to nearly 11 years in 1990.

From 1980 to 1990, the number of scientists and technicians in industrialised countries almost doubled to about 70 per 1000 people. Spending on research and development also saw rapid growth in these countries, reaching $350 billion in 1990. By contrast, the number of science workers in developing countries remained below 20 per 1000 people, and research spending fell from about $50 billion to only $25 billion.

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